Help with text for mercurial.selenic.com

Arne Babenhauserheide arne_bab at web.de
Thu Dec 8 14:37:55 CST 2011


Am Mittwoch, 7. Dezember 2011, 14:28:41 schrieb Tom Anderson:
> When in doubt, reach for the passive voice:
> 
>     A multitude of workflows are supported, and functionality is
> easily enhanced with extensions.
> 
> A bit more freestyle:
> 
>     A multitude of workflows are possible, and extensions allow easy
> enhancement of functionality .

I think this sounds a bit forced, which makes it too weak. 

And in PR (that’s what a website is), passive voice is not that effective. 

But thank you for your input anyway!

Best wishes, 
Arne
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